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Czy mógłby ktoś poprawić mi zadanie z angielskiego?

Tematem jest: People's tastes in music have the most influence on how they look and behave. Mam o tym mówić/rozmawiać z panią przez 2/3 minuty. Napisałam mniej więcej co o tym myślę i przetłumaczyłam, ale wiem, że jest dużo błędów.. w dodatku nawymyślałam trudne słowa i zdania, a może jest możliwość ujęcia tego samego bardziej "na moim poziomie" Czyli coś w stylu A2? Baardzo proszę o szybką pomoc to ważne.

In my opinion not always music to a large extent affects how to dress and what we are, but often it is. In particular, this can be seen when people belonging to various subcultures. For example: people listening metal dress in black clothes, boots and often wears shirts with the name of your favorite music bands. Similarly with the punks and the Emperor, but their style is quite different. While the people listening classical music most often dress smartly. and people who listen to rap or hip-hop wear baggy jeans, caps, loose t-shirts, etc. Seeing these people, we can guess what kind of music to listen to and usually manages to guess. Similarly is with the behavior, although this is less common than with the dress. First of all, because on various subcultures is a lot of the infamous stereotypes. While the people are not listening to a specific type of music often do not have a particular style of dress, and their behavior is different depending on an educated character. However, passing people on the street only sometimes we are able to identify their favorite style of music.